tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post165712391264843470..comments2011-11-08T14:13:39.403-05:00Comments on The Maniacal Mind: Poetry: The ForgottenAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11610184057896951494noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-67539441283998292502011-10-25T21:59:56.951-04:002011-10-25T21:59:56.951-04:00powerful piece on a sad marriage, wow.
you got the...powerful piece on a sad marriage, wow.<br />you got the skill in story telling.Jingle Poetry At Olive Gardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14591535202657302861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-25395105700565027432011-10-25T12:44:04.884-04:002011-10-25T12:44:04.884-04:00Hello.
Visiting from The Poetry Pantry.
WoW! This...Hello.<br />Visiting from <a href="http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2011/10/poetry-pantry-is-now-open-72.html" rel="nofollow">The Poetry Pantry.</a><br /><br />WoW! This is a hard-hitting, gut-wrenching piece. I have to agree with Adura...the male's experience is rarely spoken about.<br /><br />Well done!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.<br /><br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/10/undress-me-with-your-sultry-eyes.html" rel="nofollow">Undress Me With Your Sultry Eyes</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-4622383777222464362011-10-24T04:46:34.442-04:002011-10-24T04:46:34.442-04:00Wow! The male experience of a broken marriage that...Wow! The male experience of a broken marriage that we don't often get to hear about. You tell it well.Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-39318922097903886532011-10-23T15:38:59.265-04:002011-10-23T15:38:59.265-04:00Abandonment triggers so many reactions in so many ...Abandonment triggers so many reactions in so many people of all ages. Some can cope, some can't but eventually learn to, and some never do. Another tender take on what it means to be alone, to be without guidance, companionship, self-esteem, and to sink into poverty, homelessness, neglect and eventually death. Very sad indeed. Well done with the repeating line reinforcing the misery.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-36355200858646812092011-10-23T10:32:10.684-04:002011-10-23T10:32:10.684-04:00oh and BTW... it's NOT 'few' but &...oh and BTW... it's NOT 'few' but 'fer' ...I hate to be corrected by bots.tinkwelbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14163026661564191285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-18483474849666760872011-10-23T10:30:43.092-04:002011-10-23T10:30:43.092-04:005 Wows here.
I see You! What a persona piece, my...5 Wows here.<br /><br />I see You! What a persona piece, my friend! this is a keeper few sure.<br />well constructed and the repetition is perfect.<br /><br />I'm telling ya: this piece turns out better than the speaker does.tinkwelbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14163026661564191285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-90411346982775412912011-10-23T08:58:59.366-04:002011-10-23T08:58:59.366-04:00Powerful and gut-wrenching. I really feel for your...Powerful and gut-wrenching. I really feel for your "other" person. This stanza really struck out at me:<br /><br />And somehow, some way, in some time, it came to this<br />My emotions were so broken that I fell away from life<br />I hit that non-life-rock-bottom and could never climb out<br />It was a pit so-far deep as the depths of my strifeLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-4065789200720084062011-10-23T07:43:23.298-04:002011-10-23T07:43:23.298-04:00thanks for making us see him... there are things t...thanks for making us see him... there are things that can destroy a person's life..i've met doctors who ended up on the street because of an unlucky chain of things going wrong and they just never got over them..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-37732987384062246512011-10-22T23:04:39.398-04:002011-10-22T23:04:39.398-04:00This is truly an other voice. I think about how an...This is truly an other voice. I think about how animals, when they are going to die, crawl away to some shadowed place to be alone. You take us into the head of a person tragically doing that.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-69488408822931202182011-10-22T22:04:01.860-04:002011-10-22T22:04:01.860-04:00wow i really feel for this guy....life came at him...wow i really feel for this guy....life came at him fast ball chest high and he missed...sad hard reality here man...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-22491683735891959082011-10-22T21:31:25.249-04:002011-10-22T21:31:25.249-04:00i was thinking, what if the world was literaly goi...i was thinking, what if the world was literaly going to pieces, and you went to spend the last minutes with your wife, but she was gone, what would you do?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-7642077593249090012011-10-22T21:12:25.404-04:002011-10-22T21:12:25.404-04:00Kind of chilling... nice piece.Kind of chilling... nice piece.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-45408505439116620822011-10-22T20:42:25.771-04:002011-10-22T20:42:25.771-04:00Nick! Fantastic writing here (not going to tell wh...Nick! Fantastic writing here (not going to tell where I've been that makes it so very relate-able to me!) I can feel the life that was had, the life that was lost, and am left anxiously awaiting midnight.Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598346008115670230.post-91069738530226153482011-10-22T20:06:42.779-04:002011-10-22T20:06:42.779-04:00This is a chilling read from beginning to end. Whe...This is a chilling read from beginning to end. Whew!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com