Naylor
stormed through the door, slamming it closed on its creaky hinges. He’d been
fuming all the way home from the post office, enraged at the very idea that he, of all people, hadn’t been paying
his bills on time. He had an exact schedule for bill paying, and he always
followed it, even when he was near broke. He’d never missed a single payment of any bill, and yet here the bank
was telling him he’d missed six straight months!
“What a load of
bull!”
The sound of pans
clanging to the floor rang out to his left. He sighed and shuffled over to the
kitchen, where a disheveled young man was quickly picking up the scattered
pans. Naylor shook his head.
“Brian, what in
God’s name are you doing?”
“Ah!” Brian
dropped the pans again, cringing as they crashed onto the hardwood. “Yipe! ‘m so
sorry, Mr. Beckett! I was tryin’ to get some good cleanin’ done ‘fore ya got
home, but then ya came home and startled me, and I done dropped the pans and now
they’s all dirty and—!”
“Brian, shut your
mouth. Just pick the damn pans up and put them away.”
“Yessir!”
Naylor rolled his
eyes and headed toward his bedroom. Brian Nevaster had come into his house a
few months back, desperate for some kind of work. Naylor had been reluctant to
accept him at first—the boy was the clumsiest, most awkward fellow he’d ever
met—but he just couldn’t throw the poor boy back out on the street. At this
point, he’d just been forced to overlook Brian’s absolute failure at
housekeeping and try to enjoy the company. At least—it was his mantra now—at least he had someone to keep him
company.
In the kitchen,
Brian quickly arranged the pans in the cabinet and shuffled over to Naylor’s
room, pausing in the doorway. “Ya got somethin’ for me to do now, Mr. Beckett?”
Naylor looked up
briefly, a flash of anger in his eyes, before settling his gaze back on a
letter. “Not unless you can tell me why I got an eviction notice from the bank
today.”
“E-eviction? You, Mr. Beckett? But ya always pay on
time!”
“Don’t I know it?
I’m trying to figure out how those God-blasted imbeciles could even make this
sort of mistake!”
Brian chewed on
his lip, trying to pick his next words carefully. “Uh…um, M-Mr. Beckett…I don’t
want to be makin’ any bad assumptions or nothin’, but don’t Eland Brann work at
the bank part time?”
Naylor’s eyes
locked onto him, and he stiffened. There was a tense moment of silence until,
“You’re right. That little bastard does
work at the bank, don’t he?” Naylor threw the eviction notice on the floor and
stepped on it. “Fitzer and his blasted little assistant! This is some damned
plot to get my property, ain’t it? I can’t believe…no, I can believe it! As hard as Fitzer’s been trying to get me to sell.
He must’ve gotten fed up with me. Now he’s trying to get me off my land with
some underhanded scheme. So help me God, I’m going to skin him alive!”
Brian tucked
himself into a corner and watched the rest unfold. Naylor didn’t bother to say
another word to him. He grabbed his coat and hat and took off down the
driveway, marching on the war path toward Fitzer’s. As he disappeared around
the bend, Brian pulled his spectacles from his pocket and sighed.
“Last chance, old
boy. Either it ends them both, or it ends you.”
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Rule of Three Blogfest Entry, part 2
"The Division & The Conqueror", part 2
Second Character: Brian Nevaster
Word Count: 597
Prompt(s): A character is not who he/she appears to be
A character lies about something important
Your voice is awesome! And I'm loving the direction this is headed. These characters are great and feel real, as much as the story is immersive. Nice one! :)
ReplyDeleteWow... wonderful write. Quite the intriguing piece... Tell me there is more to come.
ReplyDeleteI just read both Part 1 & 2. Great writing...and CLIFFHANGERS!
ReplyDelete@ Everybody- Thanks so much guys! I'm looking forward to writing the next part! =)
ReplyDeleteGreat last line! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
ReplyDeleteHi Nick, just to let you know that I've been by to have a read – sorry I can’t say too much while judging!
ReplyDeleteJ.C.
Missed your post last week - glad I'm getting the chance to catch up! Seems like Brian's got some of his own plots brewing?
ReplyDelete@Kurt- We shall see. xD
ReplyDeleteOoh! Love the devious Brian. Can't wait for the next part.
ReplyDeleteO_o It's Brian?!
ReplyDeleteInteresting stuff. Everyone really does have a secret in Renaissance, don't they?
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming on the blogfest with us!
The perfect villain - a guy who works at the bank. ;-))
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