The Division & The Conqueror, Part 3
Amadeus Fitzer
stood hunched over his latest invention. His generator design had gradually
improved over the last few months, and he was about to make another
breakthrough. He was almost tempted to describe himself as giddy, but, he knew,
in order to be taken seriously in the scientific field, one had to be composed and
refined. And brilliant. That too.
He slid the panel
back over the exposed engine and screwed the casing back together, humming a
new tune he’d heard on the radio. He exhaled and rubbed his hands together,
hoping this test went better than the last one. All that smoke had done damage
to his lab, and subsequently, his house. If he didn’t find affordable property
on which to do testing, he was going to end up homeless one day. But that
stubborn Naylor Becket just wouldn’t budge! He had the only other property in
Renaissance appropriate for dangerous testing. Everywhere else was too
populated or too remote.
He snorted. Then
again, it wouldn’t matter if this test went well. If he perfected this
generator, he could patent it, sell it to some big name company, and make a
fortune. He’d never have to lift a finger again in his life.
“Okay, time to
make your name and your fortune, Amadeus.” He flicked the switches on the side
and placed his hand over the power button. He pushed it.
The door slammed
open, and he yelped, nearly falling over himself. The generator choked to life,
and he forced a smile, regaining his composure before turning to face the
intruder. Naylor Beckett stood in his doorway, looking twice as angry as he had
earlier. No, no. Definitely more than twice.
“Mr. Beckett, can
I help you?”
“Dunno, Fitzer.
Seeing as you’re out to ruin me, I can’t say I have much faith in your help.”
He crossed his
arms, frowning. “What are you going on about now, Beckett? I haven’t done anything to you.”
Naylor marched up
to the table and pounded his fist into the wood. “The hell you haven’t! You got
your little rat to hold back my payments, and now the bank is evicting me! My
property is going to be sold at auction!”
Amadeus staggered
backward, terrified that the enraged Naylor was about to hit him. “W-what? I
did no such thing!”
“Don’t you lie to
me! You’ve been wanting my property since the day you arrived in town!”
“But…but I would never do something like that! And
neither would Eland. He’s a fine young lad.”
Naylor snorted.
“The hell you think you’re trying to fool, Fitzer?”
“No one! I’m not trying to fool anyone! I haven’t done
anything! I swear!” He held his hands up in defeat, lowering his voice. “I
swear, Naylor. It wasn’t me.”
Naylor, growling
under his breath, backed off. “Fine. I’m all for finding evidence before I
condemn you.”
“You aren’t going
to find any, I’m telling you.” He wanted to say more, but an odd sound caught
his attention. His generator, working smoothly for the first several minutes,
was now beginning to make strange metallic clanging noises.
“Fitzer, that thing supposed to sound
like that?” Naylor backed away slowly.
“No. No, it is
not.” He glanced at his notes. “This shouldn’t be happening!” The generator
began to shake. “I had Eland double check it! I—” He froze.
Eland.
“Fitzer, that
thing is--!”
_______
Brian casually leaned
back against the old wooden fence and watched as a massive plume of smoke and
fire shot up from Fitzer’s property. “Well, guess that settles that.”
_______
Rule of Three Blogfest Entry, part3
"The Division & The Conqueror", part3
Third Character: Amadeus Fitzer
Word Count: 595
Prompt(s): Betrayal is in the air
Great bait and switch, especially with last week's foreshadowing.
ReplyDeleteThat was an unexpected ending!
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh! What an explosive ending! This can't be the last of it!
ReplyDeleteI'll be back next week to see how it all ties up! :)
what an ending. I can't wait to see the final chapter. And random, I know, but I really like your blog title.
ReplyDeleteFantastic! I love the last bit, the twist is great. :)
ReplyDeleteThat was a shock! Can't wait to see what you do next week. ^_^
ReplyDeleteLots of cliffhangers around next week - should be some bang-up endings, including this one :-)
ReplyDeleteI’ve been by to read your entry. All I can say is judging will be tough! Bring on Week 4!
ReplyDeleteJ.C.